Wonderful story Sweetie, you really did a terrific job with it.

Thank you for letting me be your aplha reader all those weeks ago and I am so proud of you and your brilliant story.

I can definitely see where you made changes and all of them work so superbly.

I love all the vivid imagery of when they were on their holiday in Maine, all the descriptions of where they were and visited made the story even more brilliant.

Love the ending, both of them happy together and in love, perfect.

Thanks for sharing hun.

*hugs*