Feedback from Tutor
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yonkyuI sent my paper to the writing center to be reviewed by a tutor. It was for today and I was anxious to get home to find out what was said.
It was not as BAD as I thought it would be.
You make a great observation here about how verbal communication can be used to gain control!
Again, you have some great information and observations here! I can also really understand how you’ve organized this paper, breaking the verbal communication down into three main categories.
There’s nothing objectively wrong with including a lot of details; the important thing to consider is whether your draft is appropriate in scope to meet the requirements of your assignment.
Again, good information in this paper, Erin – I just think that you are including more information than your assignment calls for.
Reading these lines and statements for feedback made me smile. I made my points and shared great information and observations!!! I need to be more concise - short and to the point. Not stray from the topic. Less is better not more. So I feel really good about my ability to write!!!!!
It was not as BAD as I thought it would be.
You make a great observation here about how verbal communication can be used to gain control!
Again, you have some great information and observations here! I can also really understand how you’ve organized this paper, breaking the verbal communication down into three main categories.
There’s nothing objectively wrong with including a lot of details; the important thing to consider is whether your draft is appropriate in scope to meet the requirements of your assignment.
Again, good information in this paper, Erin – I just think that you are including more information than your assignment calls for.
Reading these lines and statements for feedback made me smile. I made my points and shared great information and observations!!! I need to be more concise - short and to the point. Not stray from the topic. Less is better not more. So I feel really good about my ability to write!!!!!
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Date: 2015-03-22 08:19 pm (UTC)I do feel better with my writing though I am still nervous and anxious about following my tutor's feedback to use for my next paper. I am writing it ahead of time and sending it to the writing center.